Thursday, 14 April 2016

Script (FINAL VERSION)

Scene 1 - Lyle sat in a dark room.

Unknown voice : Hello, is it you?

Lyle : Yes, its me, who else would it be? What the F*** do you want now?

Unknown voice : If you want your money your going to have to do this soon Lyle.

Lyle : Alright, ill get it done, ok? Stop f***ing calling me. (Hangs up) (acting agitated)




Scene 2 - Detective spinner on the phone.

Detective spinner : Hello Chief.

Chief : This case has taken you far too long, and is costing me far too much.

Detective spinner : Yes I understand that sir, but I'm going to get him, I know he's going to slip up soon!

Chief : You've got two weeks.

Detective spinner : Thank-you Chief, you won't regret this. (Hangs up) (slight smile)



The speech in red is not seen or heard on screen. 






Storyboard - version 1



Storyboard - Version 2




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