Wednesday, 2 March 2016

The Script (version 2)

Research and planning - 0233: The Script (version 2):


We have altered the script because we felt that when the actor spoke the lines, it did not sound realistic so we have changed it to sound more flowing. 

The Script

(Lyle sitting at chair with cigarette and answers phone)
Unknown voice: Hello, is it you?
Lyle: Yes, it's me, who else would it be? What the fuck do you want now?
Unknown voice: If you want your money your going to have to do this soon Lyle.
Lyle: Alright, i'll get it done, ok? Stop fucking calling me.

Rose: Hey dad.
Dad: Hi sweetie, how was ballet?
Rose: Yeah it was fine, I'm starving though.
Dad: Good because dinners ready so lets be quick.


Detective Spinner: (on the phone) I don't care if I've been working on this case for years, I will catch him no matter what, even if it's on my own accord. 

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