Script version 1 (Analysis)

We decided as a group that Maja was going to be in charge of creating a script. She did this well, and we were happy with the result of our first script. However when we were in the process of filming the first scene of  our sequence we realised that we actually wanted out character ( Lyle) to have more time on the screen. As a result of this decision we told Jack ( Lyle ) what we wanted him to say in the moment and then came back to alter the script and come up with a second draft the following day.